Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Eleventh

Penultimate means you are next to the ultimate, and this chapter is maybe the ultimate if not for that is next to last. The battle in this section visualizes my mind exactly.


CHAPTER 11


Pew pew pew!

Blam!

Explode!

Pew pew pew!

Kaboom!

Pew pew!

Pew!

The epic battle was almost over, until…

ZING!

ZING? The Martian mothership was all that left, but the Zing-ray mounted on its ship was twice as big as huge-gun!

ZING ZING!

That was TWO close! Attack Matrix, Im out of energy! What should we do. JEREMY, use your belief system. My what? Wait!

Jeremy held his cross, then touched Attack Matrix. A ray beam fired from them out the window and smashed open the side of the mother ship. Ive been in A saucer before, but not this big!
Come on Grizzly! Mounted Grizzly, Jeremy and the Matrix leapt from their ship and into the side hole on the mothership just in time as ZING their own ship exploded!

Uncle Sam wont be happy about that chuckled Jeremy. Jeremy held his cross and attack matrix with both hands. He fired Cross energy Jesus beams into every Martian that got in their way (well except for the ones grizzly rendered!) until they made it to the leader Martian.

We will destroy your world! Yelled Martian leader. Not while Im on the clock Jeremy said! But Martian Leader turned invisible. Ouch! Yelled Jeremy.

The attack matrix spikes had went all the way through Jeremy’s hands. Man! Why? Why Attack Matrix. Just then the leader re appeared and leapt through the air with a martian karate kick going straight for Jeremys face and neck.

Why Jeremy? BECAUSE.

YOU ARE JESUS.

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